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Hello there! I write a lot of Rammstein fanfiction. I'm primarily a Till/Richard writer judging from amount of deviations alone, but I'm fine with all other pairings and value them equally :heart:

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A lot of my fics are critique requested, if you see anything worth commenting - please do so and help me improve!

Critiques


I speedread through the dozen chapters that make up FuW again so that I could write this critique. This is meant to be an all-encompass...


Vision: This is clear enough. I comment on the music-video aspect of it in the section below so I'll leave it for that - your storyline...

If you request critique, I'll be happy to oblige. I consider myself fair - if I like what you wrote/what you did, I'll tell you.
If I don't, I'll tell you that too. Always backed up with reasons, for that is indeed the point of critique.

I wish more people would critique the shit out of me too. My self-assessment pretty much consists of me taking potshots at my own work with other works. I have several works open for critique, please tell me what you think!

"In your upcoming adaptation of 'Pussy', whenever that will be, I would like [INSERT PAIRING] in the collection." 

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10 deviants said Till/Richard
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10 deviants said ORGY
14%
4 deviants said Richard/Paul
10%
3 deviants said Till/Flake
3%
1 deviant said Schneider/Oliver
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1 deviant said Richard/Schneider
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No deviants said Paul/Flake
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No deviants said Flake/Oliver
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No deviants said Oliver/Paul
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No deviants said My pairing isn't on this list, Kimby, but let me tell you about them! (Comment)

Current Fics in Progress (UPDATED: 11 FEB 2013)

:bulletred: COMPLETE WORKS :bulletred:

Rammstein MV-based Oneshots
[Ohne Dich (01)] [Ohne Dich (02)] [Haifisch (Mature)]
[Ich Will (01)] [Ich Will (02)] [Ich Tu Dir Weh (Mature)] [Mutter] [Mein Teil (Mature)] [Rosenrot]
[Du Riechst So Gut '98 (Collab) (Mature)] [Benzin]
[Du Hast (Poem)] [Keine Lust (Mature)]

Silence (Completed)
[Chapter 1] [Chapter 2] [Chapter 3] [Chapter 4]
[Chapter 5] [Chapter 6] [Chapter 7] [Chapter 8] [Epilogue]

Side Stories to Silence (Completed)
Mostly Snowy With a Little Burst of Sunshine
Moments of Irrationality (Part 1) [Spoilers for Ch. 3]
Moments of Irrationality (Part 2) [Spoilers for Ch. 4-6]
Liebes Kind, Lieber Vater (Part 1) (Part 2) (Part 3)

Vision im Spiegel (Sequel) (Mature):
[Part 1] [Part 2] [Part 3] [Part 4 + Epilogue]


:bulletred: WORKS IN PROGRESS :bulletred:

Like Wild Falling Rain (MCR/R+):
Epilogue - Editing

Das Winterlied (Paul/Flake):
Chapter 1 - Progress Bar 03 by Pikishi
Chapter 2 - Progress Bar 03 by Pikishi
[More Chapters TBA]

Kamelie Liebt Mich (Richard/Flake):
Chapter 4 - Progress Bar 05 by Pikishi
Chapter 5 - Progress Bar 05 by Pikishi
Chapter 6 - Progress Bar 04 by Pikishi
Chapter 7 - Progress Bar 03 by Pikishi

Other Works
If Thou Must Love Me - Planning and drafting.
A possible Seemann adapt - Maybe?
Lilium Agonistes - Maybe?
Chicken Soup for the Guitarists' Soul (Paul/Richard) - Progress Bar 02 by Pikishi
Eisernkreuz - Progress Bar 02 by Pikishi

Requests/Collaborations
Untitled collab (withinmeloveresides1) (Frank/Till) - Ongoing.
Whimsical collab (not telling) - Ongoing.
Untitled collab (DoorsxofxPerception) - Planning.

'Messer' Translation Project (Second Phase)
Foreword by Gert Hof - deutscheliebe.blogspot.co.uk/2…
Abgewiesen - deutscheliebe.blogspot.com/201…
Komm Ich Koch Dir Eine Suppe - deutscheliebe.blogspot.com/201…
Sautod - deutscheliebe.blogspot.com/201…

Full list of poems here

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It is a Daft Punk fic. I've been doing a small series of those in tumblr.
Not sure how long I will continue them for but this one is the 'average' length and I have that as my legacy I suppose

Kamlie Liebt Mich ch. 04 to follow very shortly too.
I've been writing and writing for the past two weeks god I think I'm back in that crazy ass producing phase I was in 2011-2012 and I can't stop I need to get it all out before it goes away again

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I'm a Durham University student from Korea and have been living in the UK for quite some years now. I am an Eng Lit and Philosophy student, and therefore have a 63.356% chance of starving to death in the next five years. I write fanfic and lurk places. Above is my plain mug and below that is my sweet sweet Monty who isn't actually mine but I wish he was.

I recently translated all of Till Lindemann's 'Messer' (though rather amateurishly) in my blog. Go here if you're interested. I only take fanfic requests if they tickle me enough. And what you get might not always be what you expect nor when you expect it. Surprises are wonderful things. :XD:

I'm also too absurdist/postmodernist for my own good.
Fourth wall? What fourth wall? :dummy:

If you for some reason desire to witness more of my questionable sanity outside of DA then you may find me on Skype under 'solitary-kimby' or at my Tumblr :meow:

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Happy birthday.
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Happy Birthday, have a nice day, you!
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Happy birthday Mistress! Love I hope you have a great day, and that your birthday presents reach you safely here soon. Snowflake and William send you furry cuddles on this special day.
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